First One Out

First One Out

EXIF

  • NIKON CORPORATION
  • photo_camera Model: NIKON D800
  • exposure Exposure: 1/100 (0.010 sec)
  • shutter_speed Aperture: f/9.0
  • lens Focal Length: 14.0 mm
  • iso ISO: 720
  • timer Date taken: 2017:09:29 09:07:42
  • flash_on Flash: Did not fire
  • Contest: Signs of Spring
  • Submitted by: Ivan Prasin
  • Judge's Critique: Subject is in the left power point. Image has a lot of contrast (dynamic range beyond what the camera is capable of). There is a bright tree and blown out sky are in the upper right segment of the image. Are they necessary for the “First One Out” statement? Does that area add to or detract from the image? If it was necessary, HDR (High Dynamic Range) would have helped. See the side by side comparison. Does the edit enforce the title? Notice the crop and processing. It is to my taste…does it work with your aesthetic?


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