The Line Up

The Line Up

EXIF

  • PANASONIC
  • photo_camera Model: DMC-LX3
  • exposure Exposure: 2/5 (0.400 sec)
  • shutter_speed Aperture: f/6.3
  • lens Focal Length: 7.4 mm
  • iso ISO: 80
  • timer Date taken: 2016:01:06 17:16:38
  • flash_on Flash: Did not fire
  • Contest: Diagonal Lines
  • DESCRIPTION AND SETTINGS : I created this setup at home next to a north facing window to get the nice soft light on the subject.
  • Judge's Critique: The Line Up: I see the diagonal lines, but other than that the image lacks visual, emotional, or for this judge artistic impact. I see the pattern of the fruit – green apple, red apple, orange. In addition, I see each piece of fruit has the same orientation as its counterpart, but something is missing. This is simply fruit lined up (as in the title) and photographed on a piece of fabric. Without knowing what you were going for besides the diagonal lines, it is hard to comment on this image. If it was intended to be a still life, the choice of fabric and lighting would have changed the feel. I did however play with you image and using a filter effect of rough pastels with canvas texture and a little motion blur added for effect, gave your image somewhat of an artistic feel. See the visual critique. Did it change the visual impact of the photograph?
    Score – 71


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